Tuesday, September 18, 2018

Reading Notes: Narayan's Mahabharata Part D

In this part of the reading, I found one small excerpt that I think would be great for a story writing assignment. At one point during the fighting, Karna’s wheel of the chariot becomes stuck in the mud. On top of that, Karna forgets the mantra that he needs to use the weapon during the fight. Later, it is revealed that this forgetting of the mantra at a crucial time is the result of a curse placed on Karna. He was cursed for deceiving Parashurama.
            As always with my stories, I like to change the characters and write a similar story with similar plot elements. For this story, I could start with a character doing something to deceive someone. This would later come back to haunt them at a crucial moment. The moral of the story would be not to deceive others, as was the moral in my story of the bird dog and the eagle.

            Perhaps this story could be written about a feud between two brothers. The older brother is always trying to play pranks and trick the younger brother. He has caused many embarrassing moments for him, but the younger brother vows to get his revenge on his older sibling. The younger brother knows that his older sibling is the best player on his school’s baseball team. To get him back in a crucial moment, the younger brother slips into the dugout and replaces his bat covered with pine tar. The replacement bat is, instead, covered with a slick grease. At the biggest point of the game, with runners on base and the tying run at third, the brother tries to swing his bat and loses his grip. He strikes out and embarrasses himself at the most crucial moment of the game. This could be a play on the similar plot elements presented in this section of the reading.

Bibliography: Narayan's Mahabharata Part D


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